Narrative Writing, Kayaking

Walt: write a narrative 
Walt: use and write paragraphs, detailed sentences, juicy words, full stops, capital letters and correct spelling.

One day there was this beautiful family that went kayaking but there was only 2 of them that went and there was a problem. When they went kayaking the kayak had tipped over and they kept on trying to swim but they couldn’t because they had never had swimming lessons when they were small. So then they called for help but then no one could hear them so then they just kept trying to swim but they couldn’t.

Then they bring out the phone because it was the only thing that they could yous and it was a waterproof phone. Then they called someone but they couldn’t because the phone was out and it had no battery in it. So then they kept on trying to see if anyone was there but there was know one and the second time they tried and there was still know one but then the third time they looked and there was someone on a jet.

The person that was on the jet ski was a security guard for the beaches all of the beaches. So then they got rescued from him and went all the way back onto land. And then they went back home and they told their family what happened to them and there mum and dad had “said to them are you alright” the kids “said yes we are”. And they all lived happily ever after.

                     

Egg 20m Sprint

Introduction:
Early on Monday morning Room 9 from Pt England School went to the park for our 20m egg race. Our teacher told us that it was a new sport but we all knew that it wasn’t. He is a CRAZY TEACHER SOMETIMES. An I meant all the time.


Describing Your Egg:

Well my egg was. Green and it only had like a little bit of hear and it body was all blue. It looked ugly it didn’t have any ears. But it had small cute eyes, but it had a ugly body mostly I liked the eyes because they were so cute.

Start The Race:

When we started the race I was so nervous and I was excited to at the same time. When we all ran we had to go over something and under something. I went over the deck where the flying fox and I went under the flying fox when I We all were coming back. We had to use a spoon for our egg.

Conclusion: Highlight - Favorite Thing:

My favorite part was when we had to draw on the egg and we had to line up to start the race. My last one was when I kept on seeing a lot of eggs getting smashed on the bark and the deck.

Olympic Mascot Quiz

Mc Goodys

Why were the neighbors excited that the Goodbyes were moving in next door?

The neighbors were so excited, because they knew that they were famous.




How was Mrs Goody perfect?

She is a Beauty Queen.




Why do the other children groan at the McGoody children?

They knew that they were brilliant.





Why did Victor and Priscilla’s perfectly clean clothes get dirty?

There clothes got dirty because all the food slat around on the table.





Why were Mr and Mrs McGoody fighting?

Because there was no more food left.





Why did the McGoodys think that their argument would be in tomorrow’s headlines?

Because Mrs Mcgoodys was so so so angry at Mr Mcgoodys because he made all of the food got to wast

Advice Blog Monster

Carrots

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.

WALT: write a recount.

On Monday morning I went into to class, when I went into the classroom I saw a packet of Carrots, They looked so yummy, I really wanted to eat them. I  Thought that rabbits were coming into our class, because rabbits love carrots but then there was no rabbits coming into our classroom.

       

I didn’t do anything I just listened to Mr Baxindine and sat on the mat. He “said” that there was going to be some rabbits coming to our classroom, but he “said.” that we had to go outside and line up.Then we did and I was like what is going to happen. I "said" that to myself.

My Carrot looks so tasty that Mr Baxindine let us eat him, or her. he has Creepy Eyes, and he is so short, he has no legs. But he looks like a baby Carrot. And he has abbes to. his name is Ben just like Mr Baxindine.

My favorite part was when we were carving it and eating it.

Paul Martin Visit

Paul Martin Visit!

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.

WALT: Write a recount.

It was a rainy Wednesday, so I ran to school. When I got to school I just remembered that we had a visitor and his name was Paul Martin, he came from Hamilton and he is a very cool comic artist.

He shared to us all of his Comic Books and Drawings. He then did some drawing with us and we drew Superheros, which was really fun.

My favorite part was when he did drawing with Rm 9/10. He did Superhero drawing with us and he showed us his one book called Kory the Kiwi. It looked like an AMAZING BOOK.

Problem Solving

Make It Interesting

WALT: add details to simple sentences

Yum Yum

On Monday morning room 9 was sitting on the mat eating chocolate mousse. And then when I looked on the table I saw some cups on the table. And there was a sign and it said. DO NOT TOUCH.

Photo - what you saw in class.

      

Paragraph 2    

What did you do?                  

Only 2 sentences:

I got a cup. And in that cup was chocolate mousse. It was so yuck it looked like kaka

Photo - what you had to do.

Paragraph 3    

How did it taste?                  

Only 2 sentences:

It tasted like chocolate mousse which it was and it was so so so yummy.

Level Ten

Statement	Agree/ Disagree	Page	Explanation
Terry plays his computer games at night.	Agree	2	“It's time for bed” You go to bed at night so it must be nightime.
Plague of Toads is a powerful spell.	Disagree	2	Plague of toads useless.
Terry can not be hurt by things in the game.	Disagree	4	She sung it again. But the blade bounced of Terry’s neck like a rubber toy.
Terry has a pet mouse in his room.	Agree	7	To his surprise the mouse turned out to be his pet mouse mickey.
Zargoth and Sofral don’t know anything about the real world.	Disagree	4	Terry couldn’t tell them it was just a computer game. Besides , he had to get to his real world somehow. And he need their he.
Terry is addicted to his computer game.	Agree	10	Terry was thinking about him inside of the computer and he thought that he was playing it to.

Gorilla shot dead

No I think that the people should not kill the gorilla. Because it was the kids fault that the parents did not hold his hand. I think that the kid did want to go for a swim where the gorilla lived in the water.

Compare And Contrast - Knight

How To Be A Knight?

Will We Save Her

It was a dark night. Spider Man was looking out of his window and he saw Black Widow trying to fight Iron man. And then Spider Man came outside. Then Iron Man and Black Widow were still fighting. Suddenly they Pushed the lady off a building then Spider Man Came and he boost off to the building and then he got her and when he got to the ground he rolled on the Flo. And said are you alright and ‘she replied’ yes I am.

And then Spider Man went all the way back up to STOP the fight. But then when he tried to stop the fight they just kept on fighting and then when Super Man Stopped it. He took the lady back to her house and then Spider Man went back home. But then when he took the lady home. Spider Man said hahaha. Because he is actually the Joker.       

My Superhero

Once there was a hero and her name was Super Charlese. She was a female. She came from New Zealand. She has powers. Her powers are she can fly, she has laser eyes etc, she is super strength. And she was born with her powers she has a cape and her cape is green it is big, she has armor and her armor is green to, and she has a Muscled Type of body. She is brave and sometimes Happy and sad, and she is friendly, she is always angry. And she loves music. Her favorite music is Hello From Adele. Her favorite food is McDonald's. And KFC.

Superhero Speech Marks

One morning Superman and Captain america were playing a game and Superman said,” I am going to win the game then Captain America said,” No I will win this game and then they both started to fight over the game. Then the next morning they were playing another game which was a flying game and then. Superman won the flying game and Captain America got angry. Because Superman won then they were going to have a fight and they had a fight. There fight was outside of the big Castle and they were. SMASHING all the windows and there were a lot of noise outside. And then it got more louder.

The Three Little Pigs

One day there was three little and there names are Ben Elizabeth and Naomi. And then they started to make there houses and the first little pig.

Built his house out of straws and the middles pig built his house out of sticks and the third pig built his house out of stones.And the first little pigs house was so easy to make and then the second little big took him 2 days to build his house.

Then the third little pig built his house out of stone and it took him 3 years to build his house. And then the big bad wolf came over to the first little pigs house and then the wolf said little pig little pig let me in.

And then the little pig said not by my chine cine cine. And then the big bad wolf went to the second house and then. He said the same thing to the second and then the second pig said the same thing as the first little pig.

then the wolf said then I will ha and I will paf and then I will blow your house down and then the wolf blowed down the second pig's house and then the the 2 little pigs went to the 3rd little pigs house. then he said little pigs little pigs let me in and then the little pigs said no no not by the hear of my chiny chin chin and then the wolf said then I will haf and I will paf and I will blow your house down