Showing posts with label 2018 writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2018 writing. Show all posts
Wednesday, 28 November 2018
Thursday, 22 November 2018
Film Review Template
The movie “This is me” was made by the block which is 3 classes room 21, 22, and 23. There movie was a comedy and was made at Pt England School on our school courts. The main character was Gabby she was so lucky to get the opportunity to be in the movie and even be the main character. Their movie ‘This Is Me’ is based on the movie ‘The Greatest Showman’ there movie was a good movie and it could remind everyone to be brave and not to be afraid of anything.What the best thing of there movie was that everyone was having fun and no one was upset or angry at each other they were just all having fun and smiling.The main character in the movie was gabby she was the one that was in every single part of the movie that they were making. Next the colours that they were using in the movie was just the normal colour and the black and white colour too. My opinion of the film was that they did a great job and that they looked like they were actually singing the song.
Monday, 24 September 2018
Cross Country 2018
Every year term 3 our school has Cross Country. Last week Friday our school had to participate in a race. When it was the year 7 girls turn i was getting nervous because I was scared that I might fall when we all start running. Our Cross Country was set at our school on the 21st of September.
When it was my second round of running I got really tired but I still pushed myself so that I could become a good runner. When it was our 1st lap I was coming 4th but then I got really tired and started jogging. Then I started walking and when I got most of my breathe back I started running again. When I went through the gates there was a lot of mud and it smelt like poo.
It was pretty hard too run 2 laps around the Pt England field and our school field because running 2 laps around our school field and the Pt England reserve is really hard and it takes very long to run.
When I finished the race I could hear everyone cheering for me and I felt very proud of myself and the other girls and boys who ran. When I passed the finish line I felt very happy because I finished the race without getting upset or anything. I passed the finish line all I could hear was just everyone cheering for me. Cross Country wasn’t that hard to run I actually had fun running with my friends and even some year 6’s.
Task Description: This week room 2 literacy have been learning how to write a recount.
Monday, 27 August 2018
Treat Others Kindly
On this presentation there is only two slides because this presentation is all about how others treat others. Which means that we all need to be kind.
Show Don't Tell
As you can see on this presentation room 2 literacy have to try and write a paragraph that is about one of the races but we can't pick Usain Bolt.
Friday, 10 August 2018
Monday, 6 August 2018
Immersion Assembly
On the first day of term 3 we had a immersion assembly.
Normally we would have our assembly’s on a Friday but
because it is the start of the term we always have our
immersion assembly on a Monday. The first team that was up
was team one they didn’t perform anything but they just
showed everyone a video of what they are going to be doing
this term. Then next up was team 2 and they did the same
thing they showed a video but it wasn’t the same video as
team one team two is going to be learning how to keep healthy
and eat the right food. Then it was team three’s turn mostly all
the teams did a video but all the videos that they showed
everyone was not the same video. The next team was team
four. Team four will be learning about how to make things.
The team was team 5. The team five teachers didn’t show a
video to us they showed us what they were going to do. This
term team five will be learning how to try out other things.
because it is the start of the term we always have our
immersion assembly on a Monday. The first team that was up
was team one they didn’t perform anything but they just
showed everyone a video of what they are going to be doing
this term. Then next up was team 2 and they did the same
thing they showed a video but it wasn’t the same video as
team one team two is going to be learning how to keep healthy
and eat the right food. Then it was team three’s turn mostly all
the teams did a video but all the videos that they showed
everyone was not the same video. The next team was team
four. Team four will be learning about how to make things.
The team was team 5. The team five teachers didn’t show a
video to us they showed us what they were going to do. This
term team five will be learning how to try out other things.
Friday, 3 August 2018
Tuesday, 19 June 2018
Sentence Expansion
This presentation is a Sentence Expantion too but this time we don't have to create anything like the other presentation that I did this time we have to use the question words to add detail into our sentences. The question words are Who,What,Where,When,Why, and How.
Create Task 1 - Sentence Expansion
This presentation is all about expanding sentences. What expanding sentences mean is when there is just like a very short sentences then you can add words to it to make it a expand sentence.
Thursday, 7 June 2018
Letter To Mr Van Horn
Dear Mr Van Horn,
My name is Charlese and I am 11 years old. I was born in New Zealand and have 7 siblings.
I am full Cook Island and half Maori. I am the 2nd youngest in my family. My brothers and sisters
names are Grace, Gerico, Elizabeth, Wakatere, Charles, Me, and Teokotai.
I am full Cook Island and half Maori. I am the 2nd youngest in my family. My brothers and sisters
names are Grace, Gerico, Elizabeth, Wakatere, Charles, Me, and Teokotai.
My favourite sports are Tag, Heeled Rugby, and rippa rugby. I don’t like any of my subjects at school
so I don’t have a favourite subject.
so I don’t have a favourite subject.
Best wishes,
Charlese
P.S.
It is great to have you in our school Mr Van Horn. We will be having great fun with you and we all
hope that we will get to know you better.
hope that we will get to know you better.
This is a description about our letter to Mr Van Horn a man that is learning how to become a teacher. He has never been to New Zealand before so he is just getting use to everyone. He is in our school for 3 weeks now then he will go back to America because that is where he came from. But it is very cool to have Mr Van Horn here with us.
Sentence Combining
For this presentation this is all about sentence combining we all had to try and use pronouns, commas and conjunctions to join our simple sentences.
Tuesday, 22 May 2018
Poster - The Lesson
The author in this story has created interesting characters! that like to do things. Sometimes they get angry because of the things that other people say to them or anything else. The Lesson is a interesting story it has interesting characters. The author of this story has included interesting words. The story does have something to say about peoples behavior and what they think about people.
Thursday, 17 May 2018
Using Appositives
In this peace of presentation I have created a writing that we had to do. We had to write 6 sentences about the book that our group read.
Wednesday, 2 May 2018
Compound Sentences
Compound Sentences. room 2 literacy got to learn what compound and sentences mean.
Tuesday, 1 May 2018
Don't Miss It!
Don't miss it! is all about a man who liked to build and design. He liked to build and design things like motor way restaurants, churches, shopping mals, day care centers, schools, and boats. He designed book covers, postage stamps, and phonecards.
Wednesday, 11 April 2018
How Does The Weather Change Your Mood?
How Does The Weather
Change Our Mood?
Which weather changes your mood?
I think that when it rains I sometimes would like to play outside when it rains.
I do like it when it is sunny but sometimes it just gets to sunny and to hot,
then I just get lazy and bored because there is nothing to do.
I do like it when it is sunny but sometimes it just gets to sunny and to hot,
then I just get lazy and bored because there is nothing to do.
What I think about the weather?
I think that sometimes the weather is boring, ugly, and fun.
I like all sorts of weathers but I don’t like it when it is stormy
and cold because it is really annoying.
I like all sorts of weathers but I don’t like it when it is stormy
and cold because it is really annoying.
Winter
When it is raining I can’t do anything I just watch the TV because there’s nothing to do.
When it is raining I sometimes video chat with my friends or I go on my mail and
I talk to them on mail because it is very boring at home.
When it is raining I sometimes video chat with my friends or I go on my mail and
I talk to them on mail because it is very boring at home.
Sunny
When it is sunny I sometimes love it but sometimes it gets to sunny then I get lazy and
I just sit down or I draw. Well I am drawing I sometimes go to sleep but that's only if
i’m tired.
I just sit down or I draw. Well I am drawing I sometimes go to sleep but that's only if
i’m tired.
Conclucion
This is all about the weather changing your or our mood. I like this writing because it
gives me an idea for my writing or any test that I have.
gives me an idea for my writing or any test that I have.
Today room 2 literacy got learn how the weather changed our mood. which means how does the weather change your mood? It's like when it is so hot you get very hot then you get very grumpy.
Thursday, 5 April 2018
Constructing Complex Sentences
Today room 2 literacy class got to learn Construting complex and sentences.
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Wednesday, 28 March 2018
Letter To Pak'n Save
130 Pt England road
Pt England
Glen Innes
8th march 2018
Kia Ora manager:
My name is Charlese I am a year 7 student at Pt England school. I am writing this letter to explain why plastic bags should be banned from every shopping center.
Plastic bags are killing our sea animals and making our world ugly and gross. Sometimes plastic bags could be good to use but you should be keeping the plastic bags or taking them back from where it came from and not throw the them away because it can kill a lot of our animals, like birds and a lot of other ones to.
I really think that we should have new plastic bags or just no plastic bags. I have seen a lot of plastic bags around my house because we have got a lot. But only sometimes we use the plastic bags, because most of the time we don’t even need to use them because we don’t have that much rubbish.
Description: In this piece of writing, this letter is to the manager of Pak'n Save to tell him/her to stop using single-use plastic bags because it is making our planet earth a rubbish planet. That is full of rubbish bags.
Description: In this piece of writing, this letter is to the manager of Pak'n Save to tell him/her to stop using single-use plastic bags because it is making our planet earth a rubbish planet. That is full of rubbish bags.
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