Marshmallow

On a starless night there was a little young  boy named Jimmy and he was out in the scary forest the water was flapping when he looked at the back of him he saw are big monster and Jimmy was scared he ran away from the monster Jimmy was all alone. Then he found his own house so the story began with a big scary start the monster was so sad because he was all alone he started to cry the monster was at home all by himself the boy was so happy that he was at home with his family and that was a happy ending. The little boy named Jimmy was so happy to be back at home with his family.

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Marshmallow Monster

Once upon a time there was a solitary young boy who was sitting all alone in a freezing dark forest and he heard a sound and he stood up and said "oh no what is happening?" Then he though, oh it is  nothing, but  he heard it again. The boy felt so scared and then when he looked behind him there was a big monster.

He swung his Marshmallow stick like it was a sword. The monster saw the marshmallow he began performing tricks like a dog. After a while Jimmy looked inside the bag and he realised that there was only one more marshmallow left! He got the last marshmallow out of his bag and the monster slurped Jimmy's hand into his mouth.

The young boy was very scared so he ran away from the big monster, he found a pillow and the monster thought that it was a giant marshmallow, so Jimmy threw the pillow as hard as he could. The monster chased after and put it on a stick so he could roast the marshmallow over the sizzling fire, the pillow went turned to ashes. The big fat monster was sad, he started to cry.

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ANZAC Dawn Parade

Whenever bode went in to the Dawn parade they heard the old soldiers playing the chrompet and they were all matching and it was so cool that we get to see the soldiers and when we went to go home there was a cherfekjame and then they all had to stop and then go again and stop again and again and then the cherafekjame was alright and then they all went home and it was so fun at the dawn parade and there were 100’00 people and it was so crowd that we could not see the creampiet.