Tuesday, 30 June 2015

Word Cloud Reading Reflection

Term 2 writing sample

1.On Friday room 11/12 went down the field and down on the field there was a big bouncy castle it was fun on the big bouncy castle because it was. Bouncy and we get to have two turns it was very cool on the bouncy castle we had so march fun and then we. Had to go back to class but some of us were going all. The way up and down it was cool.

2.Room 11 was having so march fun on the bouncy castle. I was like having so march fun.

3. Room 11 was having fun on the bouncy castle because we. Get to bounce around on the bouncy castle.

4.On Friday room 11/12 had so march fun on the bouncy castle we get to bounce around. It was so cool on the bouncy castle. 11/12 waited patiently in the line.The bouncy castle was fun.

Friday, 5 June 2015

The switch

A man was alone eating He noticed he had spilt food on his tieA white box came out of nowhere and hit. Him on the headhe got angry and kicked the white boxhe noticed a lots of white boxeshe noticed a shiny box that was unusualhe tried to push the shiny box but it wouldn’t budge.

He noticed a red button underneath the shiny boxhe pushed the buttonhe clambered on a tower of boxeshe leapt off to try and land on the shiny. Box but missedhe reached out to push the button then hesitated.

There was a whirring and the shiny box started spinningthe shiny box suck .In his tiehe tried to pull out his tie then his feet got sucked into the shiny boxhe disappeared.Completelythe box with ties landed and changed in an ordinary white box.

And then something bad happened when he pushed the button it went all crazy and got him stack for everAnd then he was getting to stack an he turned into an ordinary. Box that was white box And it was an cool white box.