Wednesday, 21 September 2016

Narrative Writing, Kayaking

Walt: write a narrative 
Walt: use and write paragraphs, detailed sentences, juicy words, full stops, capital letters and correct spelling.

One day there was this beautiful family that went kayaking but there was only 2 of them that went and there was a problem. When they went kayaking the kayak had tipped over and they kept on trying to swim but they couldn’t because they had never had swimming lessons when they were small. So then they called for help but then no one could hear them so then they just kept trying to swim but they couldn’t.

Then they bring out the phone because it was the only thing that they could yous and it was a waterproof phone. Then they called someone but they couldn’t because the phone was out and it had no battery in it. So then they kept on trying to see if anyone was there but there was know one and the second time they tried and there was still know one but then the third time they looked and there was someone on a jet.

The person that was on the jet ski was a security guard for the beaches all of the beaches. So then they got rescued from him and went all the way back onto land. And then they went back home and they told their family what happened to them and there mum and dad had “said to them are you alright” the kids “said yes we are”. And they all lived happily ever after.


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