FREE WRITING - FAT FISH / SHARK SCHOOL

Introduction:

Once there was a very fat fish. That loved to eat fish food of course, we'll going back to my story. This very fat fish was an ugly fat fish and he was a teacher at Pt England fish school. He was very mean to everyone in his class, he didn’t like anyone that went to Pt England fish school. Wait a minute I mean Pt England fat fish school because everyone that went to that school was a fat fish.

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Well this fat fish teacher his name was Mr Goodwin but everyone that went to Pt England fat fish school called him Mr Genius but there was a little girl but she is not that small, bye the way her name was Charlese and she called him by his last name Mr Goodwin. I didn’t like calling him Mr Genius because there was already a teacher that went to Pt England fat fish school called Mr Genius and that was Mr Jacobson, sometimes I call him Mr J.

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Anyways Mr J and Mr Goodwin were very big. They were just like each other and they were very mean but Mr J was way more mean than Mr Goodwin because he would tell everyone off for doing nothing. But sometimes Mr Goodwin would just be lazy like a lazy boy and do nothing just sit on his chair and steer at everyone.

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At Pt England fat fish school everyone had their own fish robot. But everyone made their fish robot, there fish robot looked very ugly, there fish robots looked like they were about to die because the kids that went to Pt England fat fish school was treating their robots like they were a piece of trash. But the teachers fish robots were very clean because the teachers were treating them like real robots in the sea.

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Did you know that their principal was very mean because he was a shark. His name was Mr Mean Burt but sometimes he could be fun and sometimes he could be very mean. By the way all the children that went to Pt England fat fish school was mean to all the other kids and the new entrance children to.

Year 6 Camp 2017

When we went to Camp Bentzon it was so exciting that there were already people that were living there. We did a lot of activities like Confidence Course, Kayaking, Sailing, Abseiling, Orienteering , Burma Trail, Bush BaseBall, And Cricket. When we got there we had to climb up a very big hill and the hill was could the KILLER HILL. Where we went? Most of the year 6s went to kawau island. It was really fun at Camp Bentzon.

What happened first was when we got to Kawau Island we had to go up killer hill then walk all the way back down and it is really a hill but sometimes it will go very steep then it will go up then back down and sometimes it will be slippery.Getting to camp took for a very long time we had to sit inside a bus for 2 hours then get off the bus and get all of our bags and food boxes out then carry everything onto the ferry and then the last thing was that we all had to get on the ferry. The Hike was very boring and I wished that we didn’t have to do that hike ever again. We still did a Hike but we didn’t do the one where we had to walk up killer hill and then walk all the way back down we just went around the hill but we didn’t go that far.

What happened next? Was when  we all came back from our Hike that we did we had to go and do our cabins. Day 2. The 1st activity that we did was Raft building, then our next activity that we did was building huts, our 3rd activity was sailing. Then we had to go and have morning tea after our 2nd activity. After our morning tea that we had we had to move on to our next activities.

Day three was a little bit fun because our first activity that we did on day three was sailing and like I said that we were doing sailing in my last paragraph that I did. Well any ways sailing was hard and it was getting too scary for me because it was scary when the sailing boat was just about to tip over but it didn’t. Sailing was hard to do and scary I would hope that I could learn more about it so that it won’t be scary for me anymore.

I would like to thank my Uncle Sam for helping do mostly everything in our tasks, and I would like to thank another person which helped the team that I was in. the team that I was in was Kawau A but I say sometimes that I was in Kawau B and A. there is a lot of people that I would like to thank like Ms Timmi, Tia, Miss Parrant, Mr Goodwin, Mr Somerville, Shirley Penu, Lee Penu, and all the helpers that helped everyone one at camp. I would like to mostly thank Peter And Erin for letting everyone that was at Camp Bentzon to stay at Kawau Island.

What I enjoyed at camp? I enjoyed everything at camp my favourite thing that I like was swimming,  jumping off the wharf, jumping off the platform, kayaking, playing volleyball, playing spot light at night, doing activities with Mr Jacobson. Like doing the Confidence Course with Mr J and playing volleyball with him and other people and teachers like Ms Moran and Tia. I learned a lot at Camp Bentzon like at Kawau Island you only have fun and no fighting or anything and looking after your friends if they are not alright or even ask them if they are alright.

Task Description: So this week we had to right about what we did at camp well all the other year 6's were still at school.

Thank You For Our Film Festival Day

Walt: using descriptive language Dear organizers and helpers. Without you we wouldn’t be going to the film festival right now. Thank you so much for helping our school and everyone. Manaiakalani film festival is when all the schools well not all the schools but mostly all the schools that are around Glen Ines.  Manaiakalani film festival is when most of the schools make their own movie and then we go to Sylvia park with other schools and we watch our movie’s that we made at school. We watch our own movie’s and other people’s movie on a very big screen. My favourite part at the manaiakalani film festival was when i got to sit next to my friends and I got to go to sleep. My favourite movie’s where The Time Machine, The Taste Test, Just Dance, And Survivor. The just dance one was the best and I loved that one it was soo cool and funny. Next Year I would like to be in a movie and would like to be a back up presenter if the other people that were supposed to be presenting weren’t there then I could back them up and be nice to them and do the presenting for them. What did I enjoy? I enjoyed watching other schools movies watch our schools movie watching my friends present and the last thing I enjoyed was going to sleep. What I learned at the Manaiakalani was that we don’t make fun of the people that is presenting and we do not yell out BOOOO to them and there movie even if it is boring. THANK YOU AGAIN TO ALL THE ORGANIZERS AND HELPERS FOR HELPING OUR SCHOOL. Task Description: Today we all got to pick out what we would right about our options were. would we like to right about Athletics our would we like to right about Manaiakalani. I picked both but my first one that I picked was Athletics then I picked this one which was Maniakalani.

Thank You For Athletics Day

Walt: using descriptive language

Dear helpers. Thank you so much for helping everyone on our Athletics, it is so kind that you took all your time off work or even if you don’t have work so that you could come to our school and help everyone.

Athletics was very fun. Athletics day is when everyone in our school comes together and they play sports, and they get into their house colours. Our house colours are Hokule’a which is ( Green ),  Hikianalia which is ( Yellow ), Hinemoana which is ( Blue ), And Te Aurere which is Red. I am in the year 6 Green and that colour is Hokule’a.

Next year I will be a year 7 and I hope I will be a house captain for Hokule’a. But I would still want to race with the year 7 girls and I would want to go to the Eastern tournament next year. It wouldn’t mind if I had came 3rd or 2nd but I would know that I won’t come 1st.

I enjoyed playing with my friends and having races with them. I enjoyed watching the teachers and the kids race with the teachers. What I have learned from Athletics is that it is all about having fun  and not having fights if you do not win.

Task Description: I have enjoyed my time writing to all our helpers that have helped us and playing around at school on Athletics day.

Descriptive Writing

Walt: using descriptive language